Great flash, but...
There we're some really awesome graphics in that flash, but you really need to fix the conversation. Even having a side scroller at the bottom would be an improvement over the text boxes you're using now. Thats the only qualm I have, but its a big one and it detracts from an overall good movie, but its clear that you're a creative artist, so ill be looking for other cool flashes from you in the future. Good work.